It looks nice. Not really my style, as a matter of personal choice. I would have beheaded it at a quarter or a third that height. I normally try to avoid extra work
but I like most Echeverias to be low and compact, as an aesthetic matter, to the extent I can affect that. The rosettes will tend to be wider and fuller when the stem is relatively short. Also, providing brand new soil (to the cutting as it roots) can only help with rejuvenation.